Above

Finding peace in our pieces

     "Where are all our angels?"

"Up there" she pointed

"Above the birds and the bees-

higher than the sunshine and the breeze"

Heaven

Reviews

[John Ciarmello]

The structure of this piece is interesting! I have to ask: Did you purposely put the Angels above the body and the word Heaven below? I only ask because of the BOLD lettering you used for HEAVEN. I find the structure Brilliant! And the conversational body of your piece is compelling. Nice work!

[Lucien Maier]

Short but sweet. I think the question you ask in the topic should be the first line. But that is just a preference thing, nice work

[SavyNess]

Thank you kindly, I appreciate it very much. I agree with you, the revised version seems better.
read moreThank you kindly, I appreciate it very much. I agree with you, the revised version seems better.

[Lucien Maier]

Yeah awesome, gives an overall understanding to the piece.