Hurry Up And Die

Your irritating me!
(Hurry Up And Die!)

I cant stand you!
(Hurry Up And Die!)

You annoy me!
(So Hurry Up And Die!)

Your going to pay. You'll see!
(When you lay down and die!)

Talking s**t about me behind my back.!
(Your going to die)

I dont like that!
(Just Hurry Up And Die!)

Die!

Hurry

Up

And

Die!

Do you need help?!
(Need help dying?)

If its dispair you want...
(Then i shall provide)

I cant wait untill you die!

Reviews

[Aethereal]

This poem sounds like a North Korean death chant. So negative! A few people enjoy this kind of message, but most don't. You're writing for a small audience when you use local slang for emphasis. You're the captain of your own ship so if this is what you enjoy writing about, then go for it. This is a psychological poem.