Drowning

Falling

The more my mind think...
The more my heart sinks...
The further my mind goes.
The more the heat grows.
I'm drowning.
And everyone see it happening.
Everyone felt it.
The floors collapsing.
Everyone heard it.
The souls prolapsing.
You all smelled it.
The bodies decaying.
You all heard what were saying and thought they were playing!
Now look at them...
Swaying..
They were drowning.
And everyone knew it.
Everyone said they wouldn't do it...
The more my mind races.
The more I feel it...
The slower I fall.
The lesser I hear your call.
I'm drowning.
The pressure is killing me.
I'll never be apart of society.
I know that already.
So this is where I'll die.
Drowning...
Slowly...

Reviews

[ETERNITY]

Now that we have talked some,
I think I adore you!
Your way of showing your soul, Sayonara,
"The floors collapsing.
Everyone heard it.
The souls prolapsing.
You all smelled it.
The bodies decaying.
You all heard what were saying and thought they were playing!"
So Powerful!
I could read you day in and day out.

[ETERNITY]

The name Sayonara is what got me. I wanted to see what you're about!
You are a self-proclaimed "dreamer" so I won't believe to poems of self destruction.
You know that is a loser's game, anyway.
Honest feedback: You are magnificent!
Write On!