This Hell

Hell is burning the soles of my feet. It's destroying my insides, trying to find a way out. The fire wont stop until it has swallowed me and everyone I hold close to my heart. But yet, I can't seem to stare this contemptuous form of evil in the face.

Reviews

[Alex Thomas]

The hell you describe sounds like emotion longing for a way out of hearts and into our external being. Like guilt or love or hate in civil times. Excellent job.

[Kesha]

This is just.... AMAZING! I really liked this! It does sound like guilt, like how you can't stare the evil in the face... Great all-in-all! :)

[Bridget Mcmaken]

very awesome poem, well writen. Keep up the great work.

[Matthew Kult]

I agree with David, it does sound like guilt. I like this style and format. A great wrire Kristen, By the way. How have you been?

Regards,

Matthew

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It does have a strong indication of someone who can't escape the demon of past mistakes that weigh heavy on the conscience. A solid piece of writing.

[David W Moore III]

Sounds like guilt. If it is I can truly relate. It is hard to face and it certainly eats you from inside. Nice write