Sweet Goodbyes.

The image of your face,
In my mind's eye,
Begins to fade,
I'll think of you.

 

The tears I have shed,
Of feeling for you,
Begin to dry,
I'll think of you.

 

The scars I have left,
That line my thigh,
Begin to heal,
I'll think of you.

 

And the pieces of my heart,
Scattered and broken,
Begin to mend.
I'll think of you....

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Hard hitting emotional work. You've found a way to pull the reader's heart right into the core of your poems.

[Broken.]

this is nice as well (: much like the others. they are common in subject matter but that is the when the best writing comes out. this also sounds like something i would write about.. damn brains and thinking too much >.< ha

[Dutch Jr.]

Nice write. Your poetry's pretty deep. It takes a while to get over an intimate relationship, but time heals all wounds, like they say.

[Antonio Valentino]

Very nice Nina!
The scars part bothers but only in a caring way, not a literary one.

Great job here!
Antonio