She Walked Out

bad can be good and good can be bad

I drop to me knees and bawl

as I watch her walk out.

She can't see me anymore -

if she ever did

and I don't think

she ever heard me,

not a word,

not a cry.

I don't know why

I wast my tears

on her pathetic presence

and not the lack of,

but I have to know,

I want to know,

that I cannot

be the victim

anymore.

Author's Note

Quick Write, no edit.

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

waste.
forgot the "e".

This is so real.

[Marissa]

this is pretty good.

[Little Whisper]

Quick writes that flow instantaniously from thought through fingers can be some of the best writes.... and this is one of them. :)

[Amila Jay]

Excellent write :))

[GunMetal]

The ending brought it together. The emotion was strong and very relatable.

[Destinyxi]

Typo: (I know you said no edit haha, but I can't help to correct)
I wast my tears >>> waste

Really good poem, I never liked it when guys cry, makes me want to join them =/

[Claire's-Girl]

Reading it feels like listening to someone sob. In other words, I like it.

[Corset]

why did you let her leave?

[Mackenzie Brooke]

Really great write, keep your head up!

[MOON]

Poignant write emotional last verse sad yet affirmative.