Hey there burn out

Baa baa black sheep retooled

Hey there burn out,
have you any weed?
Yes sir, yes sir
no stems, no seeds.
One's for my dealer,
one's for my b***h
and one's for the little boy
just so he won't snitch.

Author's Note

Just for fun

Reviews

[words of rooted design]

Pretty clever, if you ask me.

[MOON]

Ha, clever!

[Laura Maidah]

This is fabulous. Short. Neat. Great punch line.

[Mz]

As most of the pieces here are usually more serious it is good to read something with a different feel to it.
I especially love the last to lines. Truly made my day.

[w]

I sometimes work on these when I can think of nothing else to write.

[That_Girl]

Haha this is great. Love it.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Wow! Like your rendition of the old Black Sheep.

[w]

I will have to post some of my other rewrites. Humor is something I do when the block hits me.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I'd love to see them.

[w]

Perhaps I will post them all as one piece. Once I take a longer break I will work on it.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Let me know if you post them.

[Destinyxi]

Haha this is awesome

[Lily Mae]

I love it lol.. x

[eglantine]

I"d change "won't" in last line to "doesn't" to keep with the syllablle rhythm. nice black sheep parody lol

[w]

I figured I would post a mild one as some of them are pretty disturbing or crude or both.