Peter, Peter Long Pig Eater

Peter, Peter Pumpkin Eater redone

Peter, Peter, long-pig eater,
had a wife and couldn't keep her,
he put her in a pot of oil
there she screamed while she boiled.

Author's Note

The original nursery rhyme is below:
Peter, Peter, pumpkin eater,
Had a wife and couldn't keep her.
He put her in a pumpkin shell
And there he kept her, very well.

Reviews

[MOON]

Ha very good take on the poem.

[Brenden Bow]

Ha, I love it! xD

[Corset]

W...this is disturbing, lol.

[w]

why thank you.

[That_Girl]

Well this is ummm.... creepy. lol good job though.

[w]

Thank you

[eglantine]

why goodness lol