The Dodo

The Dodo

A Poem by w
"

true story

"
Once you held me
in your arms,
but then you were
gone for oh so long

I don't know
of any other way to say this,

so mom,

Have a nice day and
F**k Off.

© 2012 w


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whoa, I was shocked at the ending
unpredictable
:)


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

w

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Ha! My relationship with my own in 9 lines. Bravo.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOL

Awesome way to put it.
Best I've read in a while, now!
Putting it in my faves

Posted 13 Years Ago


w

13 Years Ago

Thank you
Theraputic for you I'm sure.

Posted 13 Years Ago
Sounds like a plan. Nice one.

Posted 13 Years Ago
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Enough said...

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on December 27, 2012
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w
w

Cincinnati, OH



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I climb inside my mind through the windows to the soul that I sold for a kiss in the fourth grade. I write about the adventures I have in my schizophrenic mind and the scars that my past has left. .. more..