belief

belief

A Poem by w
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free write

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Eating the mind of the mindless drones who drone on about their beliefs when they believe in nothing but money

© 2012 w


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w
This is a free write. No forethought went into this.

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We are all lemmings whining about middle-class pain and writing 2deep4u2getMe. It's very true. Static feel. Nice alliteration. The plural sounds and aural motif is wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

scathing, honest and unfortunately probably very true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Clever and so true.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It took me two readings to fully grasp the depth of this little piece. For a free write this is powerful. I am impressed.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wish it were longer and emphasized your point more... but I love the repetition of "mind," "drone," and "belief" in the sentence you do have

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hummmm .. Ok


Jazz . :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short but good......

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 22, 2012
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w

Cincinnati, OH



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I climb inside my mind through the windows to the soul that I sold for a kiss in the fourth grade. I write about the adventures I have in my schizophrenic mind and the scars that my past has left. .. more..