GO AWAY

just using poetry to vent about somebody who is supposedly my "friend"

dreams to dark and days to bright
help me I'm losing the internal fight
you stick around like a fat leach
your voice becoming a screech

I cant believe i let it go this far

emotions covered by tar

why did I ever let you aroun

should not have let my guard down

please just get out of my way

you make me hate every single day
you think you grasp my very soul
I AM THE ONE IN CONTROL!!!!!!

Author's Note

again I know its around not aroun but around didn't rhyme aroun did and your suppose to yell the part in caps

Reviews

[Brittany W]

I've experience friendships where people say they're your friends and they're really just two faced, i loved this poem because its saying how you're not letting them take control, its your life. i loved this, nicely written.

[Undying Glory]

wonder why no one's reviewed this before. it's an interesting poem in my humble opinion, and that last stanza's the best part, methinks. good job