Winter

I wrote this, but something seems to be missing. I normally don't put up any poems I think sound wrong, but it sounds right, but unfinshied to me. If you can think of anything let me know.

Winter

By
Steven "Screechawk k'Shaya" Marshall

The winter may be cold, it may be bitter
But those who can't take it, is really a quitter
It's easy to keep warm, find someone to care
Then hold them real close, now the warmth is there
And if you don't have someone to keep the warmth up
Bundle up, and get some coco, a nice hot cup.