The Siren's Song

written a long time ago (by that i mean five months). decided i liked it enough to put it up :)

Your siren song filled my soul,
So that I wouldn’t see the rocks ashore.
I steered my ship right into them;
Wrecked by what I adore.

T’was the sweetest song that ever
Ratcheted through my skull.
Tenderly I poisoned myself,
Seduced by the siren lull.

As I lay bleeding upon the rocks,
I saw your eyes, red with sin.
Gasping for breath, I gave my request,
“Please sing your song once again...”

As I closed my eyes you mustered the notes,
And I knew at once they were wrong.
But I learned that’s the price you must pay,
When you sell your life for siren’s song.

Reviews

[.]

Great poem! And great rhythm! :D 100/100

[Nicole]

oh thank you so very much!! :) that's so kind of you

[.]

You're welcome!

[Soul Fire]

I really like this! Great work!

[Nicole]

thank you! :)

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome :D (Its raya!)

[Nicole]

oh hey! new username?? :) i like it. what's the meaning behind it?

[Soul Fire]

Yep new user,and something I thought of,plus my boyfriend is into ancient mythology.

[Nicole]

oh cool :)

[Soul Fire]

Yeah :D He joined here today :D

[Nicole]

oh good for him! :) what's his username? i'll go check out his stuff later :)

[Soul Fire]

he's the Saurian Guardian