Another, not just

And the tide came

To swallow the dirt

From a past path

That would lead

Me to him

In the shade

Of his branch

A river flows

And snow falls

On his skin

A first feel

A new beginning

I breathe

To let it in

I dare to

Breathe again

Only him

Author's Note

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

So many elements used by the author for the entitled muse . Perhaps tide pertains to a second chance in life . Perhaps a wind of change blowing in favor of abereaved longing for a new beginning . Perhaps a river signifies a source of strength and provision where they can both hope and cling for sustenance . A drop of first snow on a bare skin may signifies anew chapter of life that has long been pause and its time to move on and face a change of season . Something that has long been forgotten and the glimpse of snow adear reminder of a tender hope worth looking . Something has ceased living and something had died inside but here its willing to breathe again . This time it's only for him . Perhaps the piece is a love gone cold or a triangle .

[V. P. Trujillo]

And I am beat, little lady.

[Michelle N. H.]

Why is 10 characters a necessity? Damn it, sometimes a lady just wants to smile... ^^

[V. P. Trujillo]

It used to be twenty, but yeah. I get the point. x)

[Michelle N. H.]

20?! Now that's just ridiculous.

[V. P. Trujillo]

Indeed.

[BlueDreams]

A magnificent collaboration of Beautiful painting, Silent pleasing piano theme and a thoroughly meaningful & fascinating poem! :) It was a great read :) It deserves 100/100 rating..

[Michelle N. H.]

Well, thank you very much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it :)

[BlueDreams]

It was my pleasure :)