In the arms of

I try to breathe

In the bubble of

Our creation

To feel what it is to be living

I know I love you

But you let go

When we dance

I fall to the floor

And memories from the past are

Far beyond the sun

I cry

In the arms of pretending

Author's Note

Reviews

[KeeD]

I love the way you presented this. It's like a slow dance into depression but it's something beautiful to experience. My review may come across cynical but I promise you it's far from it, I truly found beauty in the sadness of her loneliness for she expressed it so well, like a masterpiece of sorts. As if it was her cross to bear but her gift to the world.

[Gio J. C.]

Words arranged in such a way that they are given life and feeling. The definitions for the word “poetry” are endless, but here you have created a perfect example of it. Thank you! :)

[AaronFreitas]

This is beautifully sad... I love it! This is my first poem of yours I've read... I found a new awesome writer :) Consider me a fan :)

[marcus]

A sad vision of a lost love..