death cab

we sped past a cream and copper skyline
the finality and the intensity, the promise
made in earnest.
in the darkness, next to me she lingered
arm resting against mine on the cool metal
hair like cream and caramel
but her eyes were empty.
i let mine blur and dislocate, to become
your arm, your hair - just don't meet her gaze
and you can shape your own reality.
i gave life to the reverberating walls
opened up the sky into clouds
transformed these pillars into falling rain
a memory and an imagining
combining to form tangible truth.
his voice solidifies my joy, he immerses me in it
i cling for support and release
i cast my eyes above
i'm alive.

Author's Note

i wrote this at stupid o'clock, forgive the crapness

Reviews

[Amy]

WOW!
Once again, nice write!
I feel the adrenaline rush! x