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A Poem by sea lily

rescue me tonight
amidst the sheets
between the ceiling
and the cluttered floor.
tense movement
shaking breath, his heart
his heart is racing.
as his toes curl between mine
his thumbs press against mine
no question, no statement
turn into me, they whisper
relief.

© 2008 sea lily

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J.E. Stroud

I really like the repetition in "his heart, his heart is racing". Good job

Posted 17 Years Ago

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sea lily

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