athan's

barren frames, staring
paralysed with a feeling
we stayed much too long.

now the waves, crashing
i want to crumble the rocks
between my fingers.

is the day over now?
for sleep cannot find me here
in my secret mind.

Reviews

[Saturnalia]

Very emotional. I like it. This is something to be read nurmerous times, and pondered endlessly. A beautiful write.