fin.

i want to release you from my heart,
a shaking flight across my mind's expanse
where you and i are free.
and i tell myself, it's possible.
and my brow won't cloud when she speaks too loud
and brutalises, brash, brazen.
f**k.
i've nothing to hold or give in turn,
i'm a grave dependency.
and my heart still beats regularly.
but it's not enough.

i want to write the final word,
upon a page that will no doubt resonate
with my true meaning...
with my not-so-hidden feeling.

so, now:
a flourish, a flipside.
la fin.

Reviews

[@zeewhykay]

Ouch ! You hit me good ! I drank your words to the brim. I can connect so easily to this piece, very well done !

[Anna]

I liked this...nicely constructed!