inappropriate

this is s**t

seven doubles,

and a lot of speech.

i haven't spoken a word,

since,

well,

a few weeks at least.

i'm pretty sure,

i was just happy.

to see you, and to be there...

i'd added a couple of inches to my hair.

but that word emerges again

from the birthday girl.

maybe everything i ever do

is just hugely

grossly

too inappropriate

for all of you.

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

the sprawling verse keeps the attention well.. but i think i lost your visual scene..