O wake O Man Wake

This is a poem

O wake O man wake
Thy sin has filled a lake
Thou proved nature's patience breaks
Thou checked the living only to partake

Mother nature weeps thou sipped her pain . The grim death in awe his scythe in vain
Thou broke it into pieces with a pill or four
O dear!
The smoke rises and thy future fears
In its oven thy motherland thou bake
O wake O man wake Thy sin has filled a lake

Thou took a life and ants small breath
Then A horse thy greed won't death
But now thou dothnt spare
Thy kind, just cruel as fair
CONGRATULATIONS! Thou lost thy way
Now thou head to dismay
Thy love thy pain thyself is fake
But before thou realise it's too late to wake
Make thy choice
O take thy break
O wake O man wake
Thy sin has filled a lake



-Sehaj

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Reviews

[!AMJ!]

Excellent job! I enjoyed the flow of this poem, as well as the quirky quote often making its presence adaptable 'O man, O wake'. I also loved that you included rhymes in your style of poetry and I find your work enjoyable to read.

[S€H@J]

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