ChVI: Drowning

ChVI: Drowning

A Chapter by S€H@J

The milk did not rise this time. It froze mid-motion, every ripple suspended as if the world had been paused by something that wasn’t me. That was when I saw it standing on the surface. Not sinking. Not floating. Standing. It looked like me, but stretched wrong, as though someone had taken the outline of my body and pulled it upward until the proportions forgot how to behave. Its limbs were too long. Its shoulders slightly uneven. The fur wasn’t a color I recognized; it was simply darker, duller, like something drained of warmth. And its smile�"its smile was carved too cleanly into its face. It didn’t blink.
I tried to step back, but my leg stalled halfway through the command. The thing tilted its head at the exact angle I had earlier, perfectly mirrored, perfectly deliberate. “You run loud,” it said. Its mouth did not open. The voice came from behind me. I turned instinctively, but it was still in front�"closer now. The milk beneath my paws cracked softly, thin fractures spreading outward with each slow shift of its weight. It didn’t walk; it simply appeared nearer every time my focus faltered.
I decided not to blink. My eyes burned instantly. It smiled wider.
“You made this,” it said gently. “All of it.”
The sky flickered white and stayed that way a heartbeat too long. When the cereal colors forced themselves back into place, the thing stood inches from me. Up close, I could see faint seams at the corners of its grin, as if the smile had once split too far and been forced back together. I tried to raise the spoon, but my arm jerked violently upward, overshooting the motion. My shoulder twisted with a grinding shift that made my vision pulse. Something deep in the joint strained in protest. The creature watched without blinking.
Then it moved.
Its hand snapped around my wrist with impossible speed. The fingers were thin and cold and strong in a way that felt intentional. It tightened its grip slowly, deliberately. Pressure built with sickening patience. I felt the bones in my wrist compress, resisting at first, then shifting under force. I tried to pull back, but my body responded seconds too late, jerking uselessly after the damage had already begun. “You wanted control,” it whispered. The voice seemed to echo from inside my own head.
It twisted.
My arm bent past its natural line�"not snapping cleanly, not dramatically, just bending far enough to make my breath tear out of me. Pain flooded through my shoulder and down my side in a blinding surge. I screamed, but the milk swallowed the sound before it could exist. The creature leaned closer, its grin stretching wider, the seams straining as if the skin might split again.
“You can’t move,” it said softly. “You never could.”
The milk surged upward around my legs, thick and heavy, pinning them in place. I tried to kick, but my limbs lagged, sluggish and unreliable. Its other hand pressed flat against my chest. Not clawing. Not striking. Just pressing. The pressure increased gradually, crushing, methodical. My ribs protested under the force. My breathing stuttered and collapsed into shallow, broken attempts. The white sky fractured overhead, cracks of light tearing through the cereal illusion.
In the milk’s reflection beneath us, I wasn’t a fox.
I was smaller. Still. Lying flat.
The creature followed my gaze downward and made a low, almost sympathetic sound. “You see it now,” it murmured.
The pressure on my chest intensified until the world narrowed to a tunnel. My arm hung uselessly at an angle I didn’t want to look at. The milk climbed to my chin, warm and suffocating. The creature gave one final shove�"not violent, not frantic�"just firm and certain.
I went under.
The surface closed above me without a splash.
And through the milky distortion, the last thing I saw was that unblinking smile watching me sink.


© 2026 S€H@J


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Added on February 28, 2026
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S€H@J
S€H@J

Kathua, Kathua, India



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Hey! I’m Sehaj Saksham, 14, from India. I write whenever an idea hits — sometimes random, sometimes thoughtful. Still exploring and learning as I go. Just here to enjoy writing, share a fe.. more..