The Rose who defied the sun

When do the signs decide our love

When does society approve of our hearts

If two people can be unhappy together

Why can't two people be happy together

There was a rose once

Who fell in love with the moon

It defied the sun

Because for all it's worth

There's only one single thing we can trust

It's ourselves

To oppose

And to think in harmony

So what next

What do we do now

As a human being

Do we defy the sun?

Author's Note

Yup, reviews welcome.

Reviews

[Terohime]

Oh wow this was great Seimei, it held awesome wording and the way you used the sun in it, was out standing. My favorite part o this is the last sentance. "Do we defy the sun?" That is a good question indeed. We are trapped by the way society thinks we should love, and most of us have different views on that. So to answer your question stated in that sentance, YEs we do defy the sun, and maybe one day the sun will let us choose our own path with out being ridiculed.
~Your firend Res

[Rivaxorus]

Thanks so much ^w^

[KeeD]

I like the comparison of the rose to human beings, each one beautiful in its own way.. but obstacles and thorns restrict happiness.. Good write, I enjoyed it :) Keep writing.

[Rivaxorus]

Thanks so much ^w^