I was once a rat
A Poem by
Rivaxorus
I was once a rat Running among the flowers Taking only what I needed Seeking nothing else I was once a mouse Eating all the wheat Causing the farmers trouble Hunted by cats I was once a cat Hunting the mice Making a living All on my own I was once a dog Obeying my masters orders Getting in trouble Then put to sleep I was once a bird Wild and free But they took me away And threw me away I was once a field Growing tall and strong Until you cut me down To earn money I was once a forest A home for animals Until you cut me down And built your home I was once a lake Filled with fish Until you poisoned me Now all is dead I was once human Sucking the lake dry Cutting down the forests Now look where I am I was only once, a kind and gentle rat
© 2013 Rivaxorus
Author's Note
I was only once, a king and gentle rat
Reviews
Profound. Good write.
~pat
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Haha, this was a good write. It's unique for sure.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Haha, this was a good write. It's unique for sure.
This is a good analogy, well written. We certainly are intertwined with all of the other creatures, and we have such a tremendous impact! Good job.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is a good analogy, well written. We certainly are intertwined with all of the other creatures, and we have such a tremendous impact! Good job.
Hey this is really good, like alot
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hey this is really good, like alot
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A unique poem to say the least ...:)
Posted 12 Years Ago
A unique poem to say the least ...:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Good poem, keep on penning.
~Res
Posted 12 Years Ago
Good poem, keep on penning.
~Res
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 16, 2013
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Author
Rivaxorus Apple Valley, CA
About
Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi..
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