Remember

I remember it all

Remember all those days
All those promises

I wish I could
Tell you we can go back

But we both know
Not everything can be okay

I want to believe it can be okay
Trust me I do

But all things end
It just seems the better things

Won't last as long
As we thought they would

So I want to smile and say
Thank you

Maybe we look back
But, I hope you do

Because
Those memories you gave me

Were sweet
....thank you

Reviews

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Enjoyed~
~pat

[s y e]

Awwwwh, so sweet and I loved the ending!

"Because
Those memories you gave me

Were sweet
....thank you"

This was really sweet. It was a very touching write. Better to think of all the good memories rather than the bad.

[Barbara Walker]

Love how it ended with a rhythmic note!

[Rita L. Sev]

A sweet and simple poem. It is important to look back and be thankful for the times and people past. Keep writing!

[Sami Khalil]

That is a very nice , sweet poem. An enjoyable read...Pen on...:)

[Rivaxorus]

Thanks ^w^ every little review means a lot to me.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Terohime]

Such a touching poem, i enjoyed it.
~Your friend Res