The Joy  I feel

The Joy I feel

A Poem by Rivaxorus

At first I was no one
Sitting in the shadows
Thinking about life
And all its bad things

A friend spoke to me
And reminded me
Of a certain place
I didn't remember

After writing on there
With heart
With soul
A blanket of light began to come down

There was no word
No  imagery
To express how happy
This place was

Now I'm more confident
Outgoing
Cheerful
And feeling joy

That place has cradled me with kind arms
And thankful help
So
Here's a poem for you all

These are my words of gratitude
To show my joy
In a matter of days
I have recovered my youth

Life doesn't seem so horrible now
With my lover
With my friends
With you who encourage me

It's this joy I feel
When writing is accomplished
It's this joy I have
Thank you all
 

© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
HAVE A THANK YOU NOTE, in the form of a letter ^w^

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This is such a touching piece of poetry. I'm glad that you have been able to open up and see the good things in your life that bring you happiness. It's such a powerful thing to see how writing can have such a huge affect on people and their lives. You have a great skill at writing and you should be proud. I hope that you continue feeling happy and this makes me happy that other people were able to have such a positive impact on you. Gives me hope in the world.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow.Thank you too for writing such beautiful words and thoughts...Pen on...:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is such a touching piece of poetry. I'm glad that you have been able to open up and see the good things in your life that bring you happiness. It's such a powerful thing to see how writing can have such a huge affect on people and their lives. You have a great skill at writing and you should be proud. I hope that you continue feeling happy and this makes me happy that other people were able to have such a positive impact on you. Gives me hope in the world.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..