Snowlit scraps

Snowlit scraps

A Story by Rivaxorus
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Define, fans

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The night sky shined brightly. Millions of stars scattered all over the place as far as I could see. My hand lightly scraped through the thin layers of ice on my sides. Why was I laying out in the middle of a snow field, that I did not have an answer to. My name?  Ivy Walker, Fifteen years old and the president of the Lockwood country. You might not want to ask me how I got the position, or why I was given it at such a young age. Really, in my mind, it made no difference. Having the experience of over thousands of years helped along the way somehow. Yet here, I was staring at the night sky, in the midst of the Christmas month, and I felt utterly empty in a way.


"Ivy you'll catch a cold like that you know." I sat up, letting snow fall off my back. Renada stood up beside me, her blue eyes bright and intimidating in every way. Renada was my girlfriend, same age, a few  months older. She, being my girlfriend, took the position of first lady, similar to second command, if you hadn't counted the other leaders of the academy. I live here,  I  ruled here, and  yet, I couldn't shake this empty feeling as if something was missing.



Have you ever known the feeling of not knowing where you were

Or why you were there?

夢のような

I have



And my room. The one on the top floor, at the end of the hall. The window was  large, running from the ground up, with dark curtains. A bed, behind it a closet, next to that off to the left was the bathroom. And across from my bed was my computer and desk, with door towards the storage  room. Somehow, none of this felt real to me, not in the slightest. I pulled my fingers over my fangs inside of my mouth. Moving them along to the tip. What was I, who was I, and why am I not dead?

© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
No need to critique if you don't want, I mainly wrote these for fun with fanfictions in it. All respective characters belong to their creators. It's just for your enjoyment, this was the early stages of development for Ivy's character. Opinions are welcome though. Don't have to read all of it since it's so long, and I'm sure there are many mistakes. All of it is here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ndWzxTQJWJZCeFW8eKzpdInb6fW-uNQa4ZEz8lSK56w/edit?usp=sharing

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I think it is a good beginning to a story line. You should continue to flesh it out and work on it more.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It is cool, write more :) love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..