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A Poem by Rivaxorus
"

Never step across a stone that has ran across the river

"
This poem makes no sense
It may have legs

This poem doesn't have to make sense
It's just here to have fun

Never step across a stone that has,
ran across the river

Why do you ask?
Because this poem says so

© 2013 Rivaxorus


Author's Note

Rivaxorus
I got bored.

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Wonderful nonsense poem.. I don't know why, but I cannot write one of these to save my life! You did an awesome job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Clever nonsense Seimei, when you get to the 'stone' part as you read you are forced to imagine what exactly it would entail to step upon a stone that has 'run' across the river.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well I hope you get bored more often, I adore this simple and quite satircal piece! x

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) Whimsical poem - sometimes boredom is a great Muse!

One suggestion - use the word "run" instead of "ran" for correct verb use.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hahah. I see you are bored...lol
A good one...:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Rivaxorus
Rivaxorus

Apple Valley, CA



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Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi.. more..