Is it bad

Is it bad that,
I'm drowning

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Jonas]

Is it worse that it's raining?

[Sindu]

Unless it's in happiness, very hard to surface.
Or food.
If not, hang in there.
Two short statements holding all the answers in it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes. The worst way to die. Maybe fire is worst? I hope all is going well. Best to do a Dog paddle if swimming is weak.
Coyote

[Luna Zerimar]

It depends.

Are you drowning in a pool, or are you drowning in the sea?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A clear statement that needs no answer.

[luvs2write]

Sometimes it's the short poems that really pack a punch. I like how this one leaves the reader wondering. Nice work and keep writing!!