I can see it
A Poem by
Rivaxorus
I'm frustrated, beyond belief It's not just a word either It isn't just the word It's me, not you honestly There is not jut one word To describe it The pain in my eyes the pain in my head the pain in my fingers I don't think its real None of it really It's in my mind That only makes it worse - More complicated than I thought More real than I thought You can't touch it, you can't brave it I can't make you happy There are signs - signs that I see I don't think you know I see your emotions in every word you write in every emotion they have Even if they aren't real - they're people of imagination but then I digress I recoil - stay away in the darkness There isn't one word - to describe this feeling "frustration"
© 2015 Rivaxorus
Author's Note
frustration
Reviews
Frustration is nothing like depression. In my opinion. But it has it's similarities.
I like this piece. It shows what frustration's all about. x
Posted 10 Years Ago
Frustration is so much like depression, I feel. Both have a tight grip but elude. Very emotive writing, this one. I like how it goes.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Frustration is so much like depression, I feel. Both have a tight grip but elude. Very emotive writing, this one. I like how it goes.
Powerful emotion and thoughts described in the poem.
"The pain in my eyes
the pain in my head
the pain in my fingers"
Frustration can lead us to dark places and dead- ends. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
Powerful emotion and thoughts described in the poem.
"The pain in my eyes
the pain in my head
the pain in my fingers"
Frustration can lead us to dark places and dead- ends. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
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Added on February 18, 2015
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Author
Rivaxorus Apple Valley, CA
About
Hello there my name is Abby Lawless, although I do prefer the nickname Rivaxorus. I'm Seventeen years old and live in California. I love writing, I'm hoping to make a career and live off of working wi..
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