100 Word Fiction Contest Entry for The Acorn Newspaper

100 Word Fiction Contest Entry for The Acorn Newspaper

A Story by Selentic
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100 words total.

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     Somewhat later than usual on a bright hot August morning, a blunt beam of light, fuzzy with its glaze of dust, presses impishly through the diabolically unshaded border regions of the bedroom window of one Tommie Pinchin, a young gentleman whose parents can seldom characterize without the words 'apathetic' or 'recluse' emerging, and slashes a terrible white grin across the student's dozing eyelids. Tommie stirs, thrust awake. Contact has been made, a shining from across the sky. The beam lies satisfied. As Tommie muddles for his glasses and groans out of bed, it creeps away, out and under the doorcrack. 

© 2008 Selentic


Author's Note

Selentic
Yes, I realize there are at least sixteen separate references in this. Consider it like a literary Where's Waldo? sort of thing.

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Selentic
Selentic

Westlake Village, CA



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I'm an 18-year-old human male currently studying English at California Polytechnic University in San Luis Obispo, or otherwise vagabonding throughout the universe with a guitar in hand and a girl in a.. more..