NOTHING MUCH TO WRITE ABOUT

Today everything seems so simple,
and nothing much to write about!

So again i started writing,
a tale which belongs to past,
a dream which belongs to future!

Whenever you were with me,
i was never me!
But now too ,myself lost in dark!!

Do you feel i should still wait,
and spend seeing the endless roads!!
Hope you ever felt anything,
for i can hope you will feel the above??.

Moons remained natural,
why does this love fantise,
tree shed roses,
why does my soul cry!!

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love your 2nd stanza somehow..
this poem is really good. =) Wonderfully done. Your emotions are expressed well. Honest, straight-forward, and a bit saddening.

[Geraldine]

I don't know but I loved the first two lines. haha :D

[$êlvån]

tanx roxi.....:)..cheers

[closed..acct]

Oh Wow, i simply loved your last two lines,
This is really amazing...
Such depth and some truth in this powerful rite.
So nicely presented.