THREE DAYS IN HELL

This is for the world's most beautiful girl.pls come back..

These three days,
it was hard to sustain,
the truth that you left over,
with a say,
that there was nothing,
nothing between two united soul...

I may be mad,
i may be crazy,
but its not just me in all,
but it is you in me,
which drives me whole,
drifting me into,
those scary future,
where you are away,
away from where,
i can't just even dare...

Hoping that you would return,
clearing those concrete walls,
build by the fear of world,
build by the doubt of soul,
but i promise,
just hold my hands,
imposing yours on mine,
and i can fight with all,
to take you apart,
with a joy of life,
and something more than that..

Pls come.....will you?

Author's Note

Its just a usual poem to relieve myself from my sadness...

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice expression of the sadness and yet hope it seems. Nice write.

[Nautili]

If you are meant to be together, she will return. If not,someone else will enter. The simple fact is life does go on, even when our heart is ripped out.

[Manpreet]

Beautiful...!

[Monica-Antoinetta-Magda..]

this is really lovely, I especially love the last stanza.

[victoria]

beautifully sad write.

[Dayran]

Speaking of it both here and in the physical may be an important part of the process of getting them to return. But you ought to speak of your plan as well, when they do.

[Kuhr Gred]

very deep.. but understandable ;) great write ;)
thanks for sharing
- Kuhr gred

[Shay]

I felt a deep connection with the poem, it effected my emotions while reading it. very wonderful

[Mak Goalie]

i really enjoyed it..........

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoyed this, another good example of a fine poem from India,lots of good imagery here, lots to enjoy, a good write from a young talent.