Struggle

                 

Lay my head under the water,

Drench me in the flooded ocean,

and slowly engulf the rest of me,

So I can feel the cool water hug my body.

Let me struggle and gasp for air,

And maybe then I’ll feel more free than I do now.

 

Author's Note

Please review!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Uday Kanungo]

Great Work! The second and third lines are good enough to bring the suicidal tendencies.

[Rosaria_V]

Awww oh my goodness this was heart grasping!!! It made me sad a little too but so beautiful

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Great paradox; freedom from drowning. How can such thing bring freedom, one may think.. A suicidal person may ponder that death itself is a liberation from life. Well-written, Serena. :x

[Serena Monteleone]

Thank you so much! I totally agree!