Oft Dispositions

The longest ride

Through hollow space

Creeds of love 

Given up 

Another day would be

Forging scenes

A soft flare of the unknown 

Instantly gratifying a pass

Maroon silk wrapped in gold

Oft stories left untold

A parade of sentiment 

Onto leaves of attainment 

Consented deep waters

Pulling away from blue like shores

The echoing beats

Moving along in heaps

Kind light yield

Broken rays of teal

A sighing heart

Reviews

[Just Kim]

This is a very lovely write, I enjoyed this a lot

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is the feeling I had when my marriages were on the rocks...couldn't force the other to retain love...we became distant...a blue sea (sad) pulling away from the shore (relationship)---
Once the evolution of leaving starts, it gathers momentum as the love loses its.
Wonderful write.
so much emotion and beauty in the imagery...
j.

[Serene Star]

Thanks Jacob -