Cool Summer NightsA Story by Serenedya descriptive about my back yard |
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So what do you think? pretty descriptive huh?
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Great subject, excellent imagery and tone. "The tall, dark green grass sways back and forth in the wind, like a church choir singing a beautiful melody" Love that line. Good metaphor! Barbara
Posted 17 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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This is amazing. Thank you.
I too love "Those moments allow you to forget about your problems and just breathe." You forget about all the heartache and everything is simply peaceful. Posted 17 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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Added on March 28, 2008
2 Reviews
Added on March 28, 2008


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