Are you a Poet Tree...?

Then Bloom!

It’s

In my story

just an obserVation

Another standard deviation

to Whittle words for the World around

Wound like Fickle filament of Fire bulb wire.

the Vapor trails of Vehement Volcanoes Venting

A parent le miserables dat carousel and Care to Sell excel Lance

While lamp lighting a way to free-dumb with Lyrical Trance

Gripping Gravity concentrated illuminated

SusStained on moments of brilliance

Burst stardust nova eXperience 

We LackLustorLove

and rise above

emo poverty

evergreen

Bloom!

Poet Trees…

Reviews

[emmajoy]

'We LackLustorLove ~ and rise above ~ emo poverty ~ evergreen ~ Bloom!

A racing rhythmic rendition that nobody but you could have written and what's more, in the colour it was born to be and, consequently, deserves! Seems meanings have the deepest ring for you, they go deeper than the eyes can see, rooted in that space where mind strongly feels then, juggles - cleverly.

[Sir Jaykom]

I like the way your shaped the line in a tree-like structure. That's genuis. Piece was right on point too. keep it up, fam.

[Damien Davison]

It was a fun ride reading that, I agree this is very nice fracturing. Great work.

[Muse]

A parent le miserables dat carousel and Care to Sell excel Lance

Orgasmic to my lips to say that line. I bow at your feet at this masterful attempt of an alliteration. I tried once...but only failed part of the way. lol

Green penning. Going green...hmmm a new genre of sorts?

[Kristallo]

Birth stardust nova experience
We LackLustorLove
and rise above
emo poverty...

I really like this, Seth. Your use of alliteration is so clever, your message flourishing with blooming observations of poetic perception. The free style way of writing is captivating in both manner and delivery. "Vapor trails of vehement volcanoes venting..." Really liked that. Great job!

[ghost writer]

all poet trees have roots deep into the ground to deep to fallow, to strong to unroot..but even poet trees can fall..to the lumber jacks of life..who are hell bent on felling them..courageous..courteous...clever..

[Sethnicity]

I do not presume Trees as majestic as you ever being "cut short" ;) Thank you... I miss You!

[Poetic Beauty]

The Poet Trees are great idea. I like the wording and uniqueness in this piece.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

all I can say is I love this just wow

[Ruth]

Damn!
Hon.....

YOU
ARE
AWESOME
♥

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I love the word choices as well as word play, placed like nuggets of gold within a world of fools gold. Well writted well pinned!