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Equality Rights.

Reviews

[Poetic Justice]

Perfection comes in small packages sometimes. Less is more so to speak . loved it

[ShelleyA]

Clever word play; thought provoking. A well crafted Senryu of 17 syllables or less. Excellent use of contrast. Well penned and a good read.

[Sethnicity]

thanks.. it was a well timed Idea when US was making the push for marriage equality. :)

[Riley Bray]

I've never been a good haiku writer myself, but this is a quality haiku! I really like it, and its an interesting way of putting it. :)

[Dhaye]

Nice Haiku of you. Yeah, equality rights...

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of the short statements. You made your point. Last real freedom we must protect. Freedom to write and think. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sethnicity]

Thanks Yote!

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the play on words in this piece.

[Sethnicity]

I just love to play with words! :)