MY WORDS OF LOVE

  

I sew the letters one by one,

The words then form a line.

And when you read them as a verse,

Your heart will melt in mine.

 

I bought you with these words of love,

That I write night and day.

And though you try, I’ll tell you clear,

You cannot turn away.

 

My words will glide over your skin,

Inhaling your sweet smell.

And then they enter every pore

Where they will always dwell.

 

My words will bore in to your soul,

They’ll wrap around your mind.

And like a lover’s hungry touch,

They’ll feel and search and find.

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

"MY WORDS OF LOVE"'
Shabeeh Haider,
Interesting theme of the influence of one person in the life of another. Words can be powerful that is true. This is a poem which tells of the love and hope of the poet to instill a image within the heart of the reader. To remember the story or saga which informs another of the writer's style. Either, of love or infatuation or possession I cannot tell but this writing is strong for sure. "I sew the letters one by one. The words then form a line and when you read them as a verse your heart will melt with mine."
The body of this work expresses the work involved in seriously pursuing what or whom is desired.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Kathy for your continuous support and your very kind words

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Your welcome Shabeeh,
I have read it through again a couple times as sometimes we get a different take when re read. It appears to be simply a total joy in the writing and sharing of inner thought and hope for the filling with good things in the heart of the one reader or to the loved one.....
Kathy

[Lydia Shutter]

A touch of sensuality and extremely romantic. Yes, words can get under the skin of the reader and can make the reader feel love. I liked this unique love poem. Lydi**

[Shabeeh Haider]

Lydia, thank you for your kind words.

[Wolf_Lord]

This is beautiful... I hope if is for a present lover and not a hopeful. I wrote something like this for a girl I met at a State Fair I was working, and I almost got arrested for stalking... Lol. This is very well expressed if just a little on the excessive side. I would love to know how the person you wrote it for reacted. Naw... you don't have to tell, me, just being nosy... hee hee.
Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

[Shabeeh Haider]

I guess we all respond in a similar way, that is why you have written something similar.
The response to the poem had been good. {Wink}

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Wonderful job describing what a lover feels like. Especially when you describe the scent which is can be intoxicating and makes crave the one you love even more which you emphasized in the conclusion " lover's hungry touch." Thanks for sharing. Laters, N.

[Shabeeh Haider]

N, thank you for your kind review

[Anindita Janhabee]

first four lines are amazing, having total sense of love.. the best way to begin...
next was the content which was completely dwelling with in a heart.. finally, the ending shows crystal clear image of love.... very lovely poem...
Anindita

[Shabeeh Haider]

Anindita, thank you for your very wonderful review

[zunie frost]

I don't have words to describe the beauty of your words .......
I love it speacialy the last part

[Shabeeh Haider]

I am glad that you enjoyed it. Zunie

[barleygirl]

This poem seems to portray a somewhat possessive & demanding narrator with definite expectations. The narrator is filled with confidence about what he/she can accomplish with words, but I tend to disagree, as I feel actions speak louder than words. And it seems to me that this narrator doesn't much care about actions, but only expecting the words to do the whole job for him/her. You've done a powerful character portrayal of someone I wouldn't want to be involved with!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Sometimes we watch a movie and fall in love with the guy who portrays the character, we fall in love with the singer who sings the songs that we love. We fall in love with the writer because of his writing. I agree, this can all be very wrong.
The person maybe very different from what is being portrayed.

[barleygirl]

Thanks for the added information . . . now I can understand your message with the point of view you're suggesting *smile*

[Gray]

You have excellent rhyming skills as well a flow through each stanza. I like it.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Chris, thank you for your kind words

[thetish]

What a kind, rich love. Thanks for sharing.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you for reading and leaving behind your comment

[Jamestown]

Well written and delivered!
Great flow throughout and definitely touching:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing