THE SILENT STORM

The splashing of the oceans,

 Is very loud and clear.

The roaring of the thunder,

 Is deafening to the ear.

 

  But when the heart is broken,

 Though storms inside abound,

 In silence you will suffer,

No one can hear the sound.          

Author's Note

From my book: A VAGABOND HEART

Reviews

[Jacob Clifford]

Beautifully straightforward and a great contrast.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Clifford, thank you for your kind review

[Nina H.]

Simply amazing! Love it, especially the last lines. Keep writing such wonderful poetry!

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Nina for your kind words

[barleygirl]

Absolutely LOVE this contrast between wild nature & suppressed feelings of sorrow. Your message is straightforward & nicely descriptive, but most of all, true to life & packed with feelings.

[Shabeeh Haider]

We can all relate to this. Thank you for reviewing

[James]

Very true. I love the way you contrast and lead us to the point. As always your rhyming is on point and your message is relatable and generally just a good read.

[Shabeeh Haider]

James, thank you for reading and reviewing

[Latifa]

indeed, indeed, I like the last part

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you, Latifa

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and worthwhile poetry.
" In silence you will suffer,
No one can hear the sound. "
The above lines are true place for lonely heart. Thank you Shabeeh for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Coyote, for taking the time to read this and leaving your wonderful review

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure to read your work and you are welcome.

[Mifa]

The beauty in simplicity can never be overemphasized. I enjoyed this cause of that very beauty. The contrast is also mind blowing as well. Keep writing. Nice one.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Thank you Mifa and I am glad you enjoyed it

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

That is great. Loved the contrast. A broken heart takes a lot of time to mend, and the process is very painful. You have expressed on your theme in a very well manner. This really happens when one's heart is broken. Dark and deep. Keep writing.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Vatsal, thank you for your kind words.

[Gray]

You really bring out the contrasts between the two with this poem. Some suffer in silence though storms inside rage on.

A commendable piece of poetry.

[Shabeeh Haider]

Grey, thank you for your kind review

[Lydia Shutter]

The silence of loneliness....it can be deafening. Beautifully written, Shabeeh. Lydi**

[Shabeeh Haider]

Lydi, thank you for your kind review