When Life is Painful

Sometimes sorrow in life can be more than accepting than happiness,inviting the paradise of death.Pain doesn't remain painful any more and leaves the life to a different version of thoughts & optimism

Life is blurred, dreams are dull,
Hopes are hazy, and--
'am not fit in it.

Welcome u bird, I recall u...
To fly with me, and take it all,
I move to happy paradise of death.

The shallow sun, and the dying sky,
Bestows the dusk, the birds--they fly,
High above the clouds, they fly,
To touch their dreams, and hopes and Life,
The night colours it Black and fear.

Tear it comes and unveils Lady moon..
Shinning, bright and silvering the lands,
With her bliss and touch of hands,
Only with my sleepless nights, I moan and fade,
In pain and wait for the bird,
To take me high on the hills,
On the lash green mass, on the mountains,
To touch the sky and I move to..
Silent Heaven of Death and Peace.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

beautiful, although sad. The idea of death being a final peace is unusual nowadays, and seems to be only among wise elders. The internal struggle while alive helps signify the finite optimism of dying, and the bird's flight is an interesting metaphor for the passing of life into death. Well penned.Thank you.

[AK]

That was beautiful, yet sad...great write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with very good description. When we are in sorrow and in mourning. "We need to look at life with different eyes.
The shallow sun, and the dying sky,
Bestows the dusk, the birds--they fly,
High above the clouds, they fly,
To touch their dreams, and hopes and Life,
The night colours it Black and fear."
The above statement could not of been more true. I like the complete poem. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Helrac]

a tough internal battle, won it seems? as much as they ever are. Very nice.

[Pratik]

Sad and beautiful.... you have portrayed a tale of pain with that tinge of hope; the hope which makes us dream that lost happiness can be found in the other world... It was a beautiful poem... Thanks for the read :)