A killers delight

I was bored and came up with this in class.

A silent killer in the night;

 

taking life in delight.

 

The only sound you hear;

 

is Inevitable and clear.

 

Before your dreams dissappear;

 

CLICK,CLACK,BOOM

Author's Note

let me know what you think

Reviews

[James Hamilton]

Short and to the point. Great!

[jinjahman]

'Before your dreams dissappear;' is a clever line to insert there. I like it

[nothing]

Short and sweet. Like me. :-) Well, it got to the point, and it made me smile, and I'd say reading that made it worth while. You did great. I hope to see more like this. You write very well.

Deeply Yours,
Sarah G. Whiteman

[YouoweYoupay]

I like the action pictures in this. Short but good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Norma M Sutton]

I think you were bored lol. Nicely done.

[The Cute 1]

this is good

[Star Wolf]

Quiet and violent. Vivid moment of murder. Quite good!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Short,deep, and really enjoyable i loved it good job..

[Nobody.]

Sharp, fast and dark. I like it alot.

[Samuel Dickens]

I looked at the other two poems you have posted, and this one is by far the best.