Lock down

We had a lock down today at my school and it reminded me of the columbine shooting which accured April 20,1999

Screams of terror down the hall;

 

sounds like thunder all around.

 

Streams of red flowing by;

 

sadness consumes us all.

 

Slowly saying our last goodbyes;

 

We will always remember Columbine High.

Author's Note

let me know what you think.

Reviews

[ariel-the-little-mermai..]

i like it

[The Cute 1]

awe i like this

[Forever Mine]

This is a look into a sad event, which is sadly reality.... this was a very good tribute to something so sad..

-forever mine

[Dream Weaver]

Unfortunately this is the world that we live in.
It's sad to think that anyone let alone a couple
of kids could mow down so many and never
thought twice about it...A very good but very
sad write.

Such a sad reality. Nicely done.

[Freeman]

Short and to the point who needs long poems.

Nice write

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

wow i loved this poem it was very powerful. Nice job Wolf you are getting better nice..

[Brad]

wow, this was short but very powerful...i would hate to be a kid in school nowadays...i mourn for my own kids having to do actual drills for this

[Nobody.]

Oof. This one'll hit you right in the chops at the end. Dark and powerful. We should all always remember Columbine High. Well done.