Hidden passion

got bored so i figured id finish an old poem

Though time has past and things have changed;

one small thing remains hidden deep within.

I still love you and im not quite sure why;

maybe it's that hint of passion that we still share.

although we dont even dare to care;

you love me and this is certainly clear.

But things are done between us;

and this is the end my dear.

Author's Note

please leave me a review and i will do the same for you

Reviews

[Wolfie]

Wow. I had a relationship that matched that description perfectly. Brought up some old memories, good and bad. I see so much in this poem, mostly because I went throughit, but with every line I feel a sense of change in...something...not quite a change emotion but...maybe a change in perspective. great work.

[ariel-the-little-mermai..]

It reminded me of how i felt when i lost the first guy i loved
It really good, You did a really good job hun

[nothing]

You know, if that was me you cared about so much, I'd have to care back. This poem is touching. I just hope it is not the last from the amazing Wolf Man. :-)

Sarah.

[Tom]

It made me feel sad but it was a good write. Things between people often change and because of that, people often end what ties they have even if they still feel something inside.

[.]

. well, i like happy endings, but this poem is awesome ...

[Dark Empress]

Aw, this is sad. But I like it.

[Ana Marie West]

I really liked this poem, though; loved may be a better word to use.