Country Love

you know who you are.

Like a single candel in the night;

you illuminate my life.

Bringing me love and laughter;

I never expected to feel this again.

You picked up the peaces of this broken man;

and slowly with time you are rebuilding my heart.

I hope you stick around with this simple country boy;

My love for you continuously grows forever strong.

Author's Note

please review me

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

This is very tender and romantic too. Its nice when we can appreciate what someone else does for us, we just need to tell them so they know. I'm sure you have, however!

[nothing]

And pleasing you, I shall. That isn't supposed to sound bad, just cute. Anyhow, this was so cute. Extremely heartfelt, and romantic at the same time. Write another. :-)

Yours Always,
Sarah.

[Brad]

they always do, bro, just be careful and cautious...guard your heart

[Coyote Poetry]

Nothing wrong with this poem. Just good words about a good woman and the possibility of happiness. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Norma M Sutton]

This is nice. It is simple in its approach and that simplicity adds to its feel.

[Geralyn Miller]

Any woman would be enchanted with such a loving, tender gift of the heart. Your ability to express your feelings, not just love, but also fear and doubt, mark you as a very special man.

Now I turn into the critic, two spelling errors: "candle" and "pieces" are the correct spellings.

[ariel-the-little-mermai..]

vary sweet i like it

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i lvoe the pic it goes wel with this poem..very vivid

[Dark Empress]

Very beautifully written. Amazing poem

[Nobody.]

Very genuine and heartfelt write man. enjoyed.
cheers!