Emotions

Keep your emotions strong everyone

Hey now, come on now

It's alright if your emotions are strong

Fighting the hate

Wading through the darkness

You are strong,

And they all know it

You hold your ground

As they try to break your resolve

In the end you, stand above the rest

And your never gonna come down

Because you know the secret

And you use it to save those in need

It won't matter, if the sky falls around you

They will never bring you down

So come on now

It'll be alright because your emotions are strong

Author's Note

We must all stay strong and help those who believe they can't be. If you seeing someone being bullied, stand up for not only them but yourself. This is our world, let's make it one where we call can stay emotionally strong.

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

I love the message you are sending here. Truly, the only persons opinion of you that matters the most is yourself. Never be ashamed to be who you are, and if you are bullied for it, hold yourself above them. Bullying it a disgusting problem and I support anyone trying to help make a difference, so thank you! And by the way, great write :)

[Not here]

"in the end you, stand above the rest" the comma isn't needed here. although i'm just being picky. it was a great poem and i love the message. good job

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree.
"It won't matter, if the sky falls around you
They will never bring you down
So come on now
It'll be alright because your emotions are strong"
We stay stay positive and go forward always. Thank you for sharing the hopeful and positive words.
Coyote

[Shadowkai]

You are very welcome, i sure do hope you enjoy the rest of my writing :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I will read more now.

[viola]

I like it. I particularly like your voice--it's consistent and strong throughout the poem.

A couple comments that I think could make the poem even better.
First, think about some punctuation. I know you don't want much, but the comma in the very first line is powerful because you have no other punctuation in the rest of the poem. Where else do you want your reader to pause? Pick 1 or 2 really powerful statements and let your reader breathe!
Second, the line "Your hold the greatest weapon" I find unclear. Your hold on what? The rest of the stanza is so good! Just consider that line.
Finally, in the very last stanza the line "It won't matter if the sky falls around us" for the whole rest of the poem you've used you, I think it would be more consistent to say "It won't matter if the sky falls around you."
Again, small critiques. I like it!

[Shadowkai]

Thank you so much i will fix those problems as soon as i have the time :)

[Shadowkai]

I made some modifications is it more to your liking now?

[viola]

Yes! I think the few changes you made are great! Except I think you mean "You hold your ground" not "Your hold your ground." Just the little changes make it so much more clear!