Infinite Love

Before you walked into my life, I knew nothing but pain and heartache.

Now I am smiling all the time because you are always on my mind. 

I never knew what it felt like to have no reason to smile but do it anyway, but now I am the most happy-go-lucky person I know.

I've fallen hard for you and I have no restraint, I can only hope you will be there to catch me.

Forget the sand, You wrote my name in the snow.

You have shown a path to brighter days full of the sun and moon and stars.
I can only hope your heart is in the same level as mine and not on Mars.

I will count the stars until you return,
For, like my love for you, they are infinite.

Reviews

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

So, it seems you have a new found love for color. Who are you and what the hell have you done to MY best friend. MY zoei? Bring her back thank you very much!

Anyway, lol, this is amazing. I love that you are writing happier stuff more recently. This especially is a wonderful little love poem.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Arrgh! Hate the coloured background and lettering. Let your words speak for themselves, they need no dressing up. The rhyming scheme in this is a little chaotic but it is a nice gentle lilt of a love poem.

[Shadows Ember]

i didnt know how to change it. I copied it from my blog.

[Jordan]

Lol, I dig the color :) Being a writer of love poetry myself, I really enjoy the happy tone and the metaphor.
Also, great title!

Favorite line: "Forget the sand, You wrote my name in the snow"

[Elizabeth Gonzalez]

Alright I really like this poem I can really feel that its brought out directly from your emotions, but here are a couple of things to improve this lovely poem. First of I think the supper bold colors are a little distracting. You should focus on one comparison I feel like your thought are kind of scattered and it disturbs the flow of the poem. Try using more figurative language and avoid repetitive words.

[Malister Mikey]

Really liked this one it is quite beautiful, though I'm a sucker for love poems and stories, good job.

[Cassie]

This is lovely, you have a unique way of wording things, I love it!