Devil's Dance

There's something about how we moved when we danced,

that brief sense of comfort, love, and ease.

Our dance flowed with passion and security,

though like a song, ended abruptly.

For the longest time,

we did not dance again.

The music has began to start back up,

that same ol' song.

And though I wish to leave the room,

there's a force not even God can stop.

And just like that,

my world goes spinning again.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Another really good and thought-provoking piece. Love how the last lines set off the whole thing.
You have a gift, but too bad (for the cafe) it's not a regular hobby.

[Tanner Kutchman]

The simplistic style allows a comforting tone which in turns makes me almost subject to the will of the writer and the poem ends abruptly making me beg for more.

[Shadows Ember]

Why thank you very much(:

[Tanner Kutchman]

No problem! it was a joy to read

[DoormanDan]

This poem has a unique feeling i cant quite put my finger on. I absolutely love poems such as this one! Keep up the great writing! :)

[The Black Warrior]

ahahaha I love this poem! nicely done!