I feel time's tide only....

Time and tide wait for none

Wind is blowing without showing

Time is flying without knowing

Orderly, they are passing smoothly 

I feel  wind only

when there is nice breeze

I feel time only

when my heart's desires release 

Reviews

[Kirsty Woodward]

You had me at "Time and tide wait for none". Time is my greatest obsession & this first line gripped me right away. Short & sweet, lovely read.

[Floor flop]

Nice work keep it up. Make your poems with more rhetorical devices