Unknown Happiness

Heart thumps fast,
As though it’s going to avast,
Nothing great has really happened
This mixed feeling has within me deepened…

The feeling of unknown happiness
Inside me, blooms this joy of sweetness,
It’s like flying up and high
Spreading my wings, to touch the sky.

This fantasy curves my lips and spreads across the smile,
I know this wont stay long, and will disappear in awhile
For we sometimes, feel blithe and know not why,
I know, am feeling crazy, which I will not deny..

Sometimes I know not why am like this
But this feeling is unique and is like bliss,
You would have sure felt this, at least once in your lifetime
Accepting the truth, is not going to cost you a dime!



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Very Good #2

Aug 31, 2011

• The Unknown
• Unknown Happiness

Author's Note

sometimes in life we never know why we feel all of sudden happy or some times sad... this is one such poem, where i have felt happy and really know not why??? you can share you experience if you too have felt times like that

Reviews

[Simple_mee]

This is a beauty. Excellent rhyme scheme. The words follow a certain pattern yet u make them look so free. Guess thats the part of ur talent !! x)

[Bette]

"This fantasy curves my lips and spreads across the smile," i love this line

[maryjaneuy]

Nice write.
"Sometimes I know not why am like this
But this feeling is unique and is like bliss,"
Love those lines. Sometimes I'm feeling the same way. :)

[deeps]

Isn't this the truth, This is a wonderful and brillant write here.
I like this alot. Amazing flow and rhyme scheme. You have talent.